Peer response (4)

(1) April

[Comment 1] Evelyn, I think the second part is not real problem, the other two is ok. And, The second part you did mention in the previous annotations, why did you give the space for the other thing?

[My response 1] Yes, I mentioned it in my former annotation, but I get more space in this to find more data to support it. It's related to law part

[Comment 2] What is wrong if poor Indian women want to be that kind of mother to get money?

[My response 2] But, this is some kind of that people force them to do that because their poor situation, they are not willing to do that. And, if they do want to be a surrogate mother, they may make the process of breeding commercialize and make the children be something like materialize, that is why I against it.

[Comment 3] Children is materialize or not, is just the way we think about it. If we love the children, even if he/she was born by the service, it is still ok.

[My response 3] But, if the original parents have ability to breed their own children, they still use surrogacy, the children means that they buy for it just like we buy commerdises.

[Comment 4] The other thing, you said you do not support it to be legalized because it’s too complex and unpredictable to be regulated, but, the more the situation is complex, the more we need to legalize it. If we see it is difficult because it is too complex and difficult to do and we give up, it is not a solution. It is going bad if you don't legalize it.

[My response 4] I see and you're right. I will think more of my position and make a revision.

(2) Jessica Iveth Villasenor

[Comment 1] Its hink is ok, but I see in the second paragraph you say "according to the article...." but you haven't mentioned in the article, there must be an citation there.

[My response 1] OK, I will make a revision. Thank you

[Comment 2]  The title is not concrete, because your conclusion is that it shouldn't be legalized, you can make a stronger title.

[My response 2] OK, I will think more about it, thanks.

[Comment 3] In the last part you mentioned Taiwan but you hadn't mentioned in the beginning , I'm not sure whether you should write it. Maybe you can write a sentence in the beginning, you can put it in this sentence "...it relates to many problems in nowadays Taiwanese life ..." just to remind us that your annotation is specifically about Taiwan, otherwise when may forgot it

[My response 3]  Because my issue paper is should surrogacy be legalize in Taiwan? so....OK, I will make a revision for it, thanks.

(3) Ariel

[Comment 1] This seems to be an ending of the issue?

[My response 1] Not really. In the conclusion, I will connect four of my annotation together and make a real conclusion. I will also mention other parts and situations in another annotations, so this is not conclusion, the real one is that I will put things in order and write reasonable.

 (4) Sharon Tsai

[Comment 1] I think that what you mentioned about the laws and the complicated problems, you can write it into the paragraph too, which would be more clear.

[My response 1] OK, I will. Thank you.