Nowadays,
we face many problems and dilemmas in our surroundings, and we sometimes even
can't come up with a solution to it, especially the events which have
connection with technology and morality. Nowadays, the scientists
invent a kind of technology that can make a couple bear their children in other
women's womb. That really is beneficial for many people. In Taiwan,
the government are planning to create a law that is to prevent the utilization
of surrogate mother from abuses. Although it is still a draft, it means a big
progress to this issue. However, the draft also enhances the controversy that
whether it is alright to make this technology put into practice? There are two
different positions in Taiwan, thus it is harder for this draft being passed in
Congress. In my opinion, I oppose the legalization of surrogate mother for there are too many unpredictable problems that we can easily solve, but there are also some people support it. Thus, what I want to discuss is whether we should make the surrogate
mother be legalized in Taiwan? There are some advantages and disadvantages to
this issue, I will discuss it below.
Referring to the advantages of the
utilization of surrogate mothers, I think the most great profit to us is that
we can easily solve the problems of infecundity for mothers which have no wombs
because of serious illness or have the womb hypoplasia. Mothers who have the
problems which I have mentioned may have another hope to have their genetic
kids through the use of surrogate mothers, and that truly inspires those
mothers a lot. On the other hand, those who have serious morning sickness that
may influences the condition of working or those who have to work, but have difficulty
to get out from bed during the procreation can find a way to solve these
problems. Moreover, it can offer a good way for homosexuals to have their own
genetic descendants by exchanging their sperms and ova between gays and
lesbians. Nowadays, there are more and more homosexuals in the world, thus I
think it is a good news and profit to them. Besides, it is also a kind of
revelation of women's decision-making power which they can decide the way of
having a child. There are many different kinds of advantages of using the
surrogate mothers according to different mothers and situations, and we can
also see that many areas make the surrogate mother legalize, such as England,
Korea, Hong Kong, etc. Although they are all conditional to make it public to society,
it still a critical progress in this event. Otherwise, it also reveals that
it's not impossible to make it legalize peacefully and well-orderly.
However,
there are also many influences and disadvantages in the utilization of
surrogate mother. We can discuss the drawback from different aspects because it
affects diverse sides in our society and we can't nearly ignore it. First, I
think the surrogate mothers may violate the contracts which mention that they
have to return the children to their parents who provide sperms and ova, thus
it may arose the disputes on legislation, even to legal proceedings. Otherwise,
we can't neither avoid the surrogate mothers' unrelated demand during the time
of pregnancy, and if the real parents don't consent their requests, will they
hurt their children? That's a big question, and how can we solve it? Moreover,
it may also results the confuse of children's self identification. That is, if
children know that they aren't born from their own mother's womb but another
woman's, they may have a messy self identification of who is their real mother?
Besides, the child will be regarded as a product that can be sold and the
procreation can be seen as a trade. Also, the cost of surrogate mother is too
expensive, only people who are in high or middle-high social status can afford
it. Thus, it may reinforce the gap between capitalists and laborers.
Furthermore, it will also arose the problems of prenatal education: who should
take this obligation and how does the prenatal work? In addition, if the
concepts of prenatal education are different, how do they deal with and how can
the real mother know if the surrogate mother do the same things as the result
they discuss? That is worth pondering.
There
will be many problems result if surrogate mothers are legalized in Taiwan in
the future, how can our government and society solve the following problems?
Thus, as for me, I am standing in the strong position that oppose the
legalization of surrogate mothers for we don't well-prepare for the
precautionary measures of surrogate mother and it really leads to many problems
as I mention above and sometimes the problems even can not be easily solved in
our surroundings. Even we can find proper methods or precautions to solve the
problems, we can't also see many unpredictable problems which we don't have any
solutions to that hide in our society. Thus, in my opinion, the legalization of surrogate mothers can not be passed.
I think an issue paper should clearly states your position on certain subject but you provides us with detailed explanation that blurred your position.
回覆刪除sorry
刪除I can't understand what you mean.
can u explain more><?
I think you make a clear statement at last paragraph, good job!I think maybe it will be better to point out your attitude toward surrogate mother directly at beginning rather than give us detailed explanation. The reasons and information you provided are useful but some are redundant in this essay.
回覆刪除thanks for your advice.
刪除Can you clear out what parts are redundant? I will examine them and revise them in a more proper way, thanks.
Your first paragraph could be more direct and concise like the following:
回覆刪除The issue of surrogacy or surrogate motherhood is associated with technology and modality. To deal with the difficulty of bearing a child, the scientist or doctor uses technology to help the mother.
The last paragraph is much clearer, but I have the following questions:
Why is the issue of surrogate motherhood special in Taiwan? Does our culture play a role? What are the mother's roles in our society?