Nowadays,
we face many problems and dilemmas in our surroundings, and we sometimes even
can't come up with a solution to it, especially the events which have
connection with technology and morality. Today, there are too many problems,
considerations, and difficulties of bearing a child. Thus, the scientists
invent a kind of technology that can make a couple bear their children in other
women's womb. However, is alright to make this technology put into practice? What
I want to discuss is a controversial issue nowadays that whether we should make
the surrogate mother be legalized? There are some advantages and disadvantages
to this issue, I will discuss it below.
There
are some benefits of using the surrogate mother:
(1) We can easily solve the problems of
infecundity for mothers which have no wombs because of serious illness or have
the womb hypoplasia.
(2) Women who are afraid of the painful process
of giving birth can have children without pain.
(3) Mothers can fulfill their desires
which have children without difficulty to work.
(4) It can offer a good way for
homosexuals to have their own genetic descendants by exchange their sperms and
ova between gays and lesbians.
(5) It is a kind of revelation of
women's decision-making power which they can decide the way of having a child.
There are many different kinds of
advantages of using the surrogate mother according to different mothers and
situations, and there are also many areas make the surrogate mother legalize,
such as England, Korea, Hong Kong, etc. Although they are all conditional to
make it public to society, it still a critical progress in this event.
However,
there are also many influences and disadvantages in the utilization of
surrogate mother. We can discuss the drawback from different aspects because it
affects diverse sides in our society. Below are the defects of surrogate
mother:
(1) The surrogate mothers may violate
the contracts which mention that they have to return the children to their
parent who provide sperms and ova, and arose the following problems.
(2) It can not be avoid that if the
surrogate mothers ask for unrelated demand during the time of pregnancy, and
how can they solve the problems? If the real parents don't consent their requests,
will they hurt their children?
(3) Self identification: If children
know that they aren't born from their own mother's womb but another woman's,
they may have a messy self consideration of who is their real mother?
(4) The child will be regarded as a
product that can be sold and the procreation can be seen as trade.
(5) The cost of surrogate mother is too
expensive, only people who are in high or middle-high social status can afford
it. It may enhance the gap between capitalists and laborers.
(6) It will also arose the problems of
prenatal education: who should take this obligation and how does the prenatal
work? In addition, if the concept of prenatal education are different, how do
they deal with and how can the real mother know if the surrogate mother do the
same things as the result they discuss?
There
will be many problems result if surrogate mothers are legalized in the future, how
can our government and society solve the following problems? Thus, I am in the
position of opposing the legalization of surrogate mother. Only there is a
perfect law for the legalization of surrogate mother that I will support the legalization
of surrogate mother. However, there is still a long way for us to pass through,
let's wait and see.
For me, I would like to melt the pros and cons into the essay rather than list them one by one. And i think it would be better to add your own opinions while explaining those advantages and dis-
回覆刪除For the disadvantages, you can discuss medical and moral problems as well!
回覆刪除It is good that you have the two aspects views. But the point two and point three in the benefits of using the surrogate mother,I think those are strange. Pain and work are the natural course when we refer to birth. Why skip them can see as advantages?
回覆刪除It is interesting topic, in this writing you didn't mention about situation in Taiwan at all. In deed, that situation happen in general. I like your writing. I think it will be better if you use those information in the body of your writing instead of the pilot one.
回覆刪除It is really a controversial issue and complicated to explore, but worthy to discuss. Plus, I think you could write more about your position in your issue paper.
回覆刪除