Reflection (2)

        After a semester's writing, I feel like that there are a lot of things in my issue paper that I need to revise.

        The first one is my position toward the surrogate mother. At first, I was at the position that against its legalization, but now I think I will change it to support for it. The reason why I change my mind is that according to the response that other classmates told me, if we see it is too complex and difficult to do and thus we give up, it is not a solution. It is going bad if we don't face, solve, and legalize it. Therefore, we should be positive and eager to improve this situation. As a result, I change my mind, my position will change to support it.

        The second, I will rearrange my all annotation, since my position is change, the original order is not proper anymore. Also, some of the words and sentences in my annotations will be revised, and thus be more suitable for my title, position, and then be more sensible and reasonable.

        The third one is that the meaning of surrogate mother should also be redefined. After the whole semester's research, I find that the "surrogate mother" may be not proper for us to call those mothers, or we should create a more suitable meaning for "surrogate mother". Therefore, I will write it into my article and give a detailed explanation in my revision paper.

        I think I know much better about surrogate mother after the whole semester and also learn more. I will do my best to write a more reasonable and better research paper in the end. Through these days, I think I have a progress in my writings and also learn to have an ability to write expository paper, I really glad about it. In the end, I hope my research paper will be as perfect as possible to make all you enjoy it!